Student Punctuation of Quoted Material Grammatical Subordination in the Thesis Statement
#1 N-fragment Y-agr error elim.
#2 Y-integration - punctuation inside quot marks N- faulty II in S3
#3 Y-consistent Y- wc error elim.
#4 Y-page # added Y- consistent
#5 Y-page # added Y-agr.and faulty II errors elim.
#6 Y-#outside quotation marks/iqm Y-consistent
#7 Y-integration - comma use Y-comma before coordinating conjunction
#8 Y-comma before coordinating conjunction Y-comma after introductory dependent clause
#9 Y-consistent  Y-consistent (but dm in F1 essay)
#10 Y-terminal punctuation  Y-consistent (but dm in S3 essay)
#12 Y-consistent/iqm Y-consistent
#13 Y- # outside quotation marks  N-fragment in S3
#14 Y-terminal punctuation Y-consistent (but dm in S3 essay)
#16 Y-terminal punctuation  Y-consistent
#17 Y- # outside quotation marks  Y-consistent (and more complex)
#18 N-Run-On Sentence  Y-s-v agr and wc error elim
#19 Y- # outside quotation marks  Y-consistent
#20 N-Run-On Sentence, no terminal punctuation Y-punctuation errors elim.
#22 Y-integration with introduct clause  Y-number/plural error elim.
#23 Y-consistent  Y-consistent (but dm in S1 essay)
#24 Y- # outside quotation marks  Y-consistent
#25 Y-page # added, integration Y-wc error elim -
#26 Y-consistent Y-wc error elim 
#27 Y-MLA and location  N-inappropriate abbreviation
#28 Y- but probs w/ term punct and ellipsis  Y-consistent (but minor article prob in S3)
#29 Y-# outside quot marks probs w/ term punct  Y-consistent (but wrong comma in S3)
#30 Y-integration w/ intro punctuation after clause  Y-consistent
#31 Y-integration w/o wrong bracket  Y-wc error elim
#32 Y-integration w/o run-ons  Y-consistent (but minor article prob in S3)
#33 Y-consistent  Y-consistent (but minor article prob in S3)
#34 Y-consistent  Y-consistent